作文评分标准: <br />1. A档(10-9)能偶围绕话题进行表述,语言基本无误,行文连贯,表达清楚。 <br />2. B档(8-7)能够围绕话题进行表示,语言有少量错误,表达基本连贯、清楚。 <br />3. C档(6-5)能够基本围绕话题进行表述,语言表达有些错误,行文不是很连贯,但不影响句意理解。 <br />4. D档(4-3)尚能围绕本话题进行表示,语言错误较多,影响意思表达。 <br />5. E档(2-0)只能写出与话题相关的一些单词或一两个句子,只有个别句子可懂。 <br />第一:作文练习:据世界卫生组织(WHO)统计,每年有200万人死于吸烟,60万人死于二手烟。为此,我国规定,从今年5月1 日起,严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你结合图片和下面所给要点,以“Saying No to Smoking”为题,谈谈吸烟的危害。 <br />1. 吸烟有害;2. 吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病;3. 吸烟影响青少年成长;4. 二手烟同样有害; <br />5. 你的态度:面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办? One Possible Version:(写好相应的中文,背诵范文) <br /> Saying No to Smoking <br /> According to the WHO,2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and out from May 1 on. <br /> As is shown in the picture, smoking is bad for people’s health. It may cause many diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, every of us should follow the law and say no to smoking. <br />第二:作文练习:近年来,中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。 <br />要求:(1)内容包括:①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。 <br /> (2)字数:60---80词。(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。 <br /> Everyone wants to keep healthy today, especailly our students. But we don’t pay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, espacially at the weekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke. <br /> It is important for us to have good habbits. We should eat breakfast every morning. We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy. <br />第三:作文练习:地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前,我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救)our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示,写一篇70词左右的短文参评。 <br />1.重要性:只有一个地球2.主要问题:污染、疾病、灾难3.措施:停止污染、保护大自然 <br />Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment <br />It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather. <br />So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every dr...