人生如旅，在你的成长过程中，许多人感动着你，影响着你，如：父母、老师、朋友、故事人物…….最佳你市正举行以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的中学生英语征文活动，Spud Webb 深深地影响着你，请根据表中的内容要点完成征文。 <br /> <br />基本情况 <br /> <br />1. 个头矮小，梦想进入 NBA <br />2. 一直为梦想而奋斗 <br />3. 1985年成为NBA球员 <br />成功原因 <br />1……. 2……. <br />对我的影响 <br />…… <br />要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； <br />The person who has influenced me most <br />The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb. <br />Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963. He was very small, but he had a big dream---to play in the NBA. He was fighting for his dream since his childhood. As a saying goes. “Where there is a will, there is a way.” In 1985, he became an NBA player. <br />What led Spud Webb to success? First, he didn’t lose heart or give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height. Second, he was able to take every chance. <br /> Spud Webb has influenced me a lot. When I face difficulty in my daily life, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges. <br /> <br />某学校英语节正举行关于“small acts of kindness”的征文活动。请根据下面提示, 用英语写一篇短文投稿，记述上周一英语课上张老师鼓励你的一件事， 并谈谈你自己的感悟。 <br />What happened <br /> <br />l I felt down in my English class because I failed my <br />English test. <br />l Mrs Zhang performed some small acts of kindness(eg. a word of encouragement, a warm smile) <br />l …… <br />Your toughts <br />l …… <br />Small acts of kindness can often make a difference. What Mrs Zhang did is a <br />good case. <br />人物类：内容要点（6个要点） <br />1. 个头矮小，梦想进入 NB; 一直为梦想而奋斗; 1985年成为NBA球员 <br />2. 原因一（不灰心）; 原因二（不放弃或抓住机遇……） <br />3. 对我的影响 <br />Para1 <br /> <br /> <br /> <br />Para2 <br />Introduction <br />（过去时） <br /> <br />（使用连词与复合句） <br />was short <br />dreamt to do… <br />kept fighting for… <br />practice doing… <br />tried one’s best… <br />a professional basketball player <br />a member of the NBA <br />although, <br />when, <br />finally, <br />but, <br />because, <br />because of …. <br /> <br />Para3 <br /> <br />The reason why he succeeded…. <br />（过去时） <br /> <br />What led Spud Webb to success? <br />1) didn’t lose heart/confidence, <br />never gave up <br />2) take every chance <br />first, <br />second…. <br />On the one hand, on the other hand <br />Para4 <br /> <br />Influence <br />（一般现在时） <br /> <br />his spirit encourages me (to do…) <br />be brave to face difficulty… <br />Not only…but also…. <br /> <br />叙事议事 <br />Para1 <br /> <br />过渡句: What Mrs Zhang did is a good case. <br /> <br /> <br />Para2 <br />Event <br />过去时 <br /> <br />felt down <br />failed my English test <br />was so upset that…… <br />encouraged me <br />/ said a word of encouragement <br />smiled at me/ gave me a warm smile <br />because <br />from time to time <br />so …that… <br />and <br /> <br /> <br />Last Monday, I I felt down in my English class because I failed my English test, although I worked hard. I was so upset that I hid my head behind the textbook <br /> <br />without saying a word....
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