实例指导 1—青少年秘密 2013 届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专 <br />题 11 青少年成长话题指导 <br />【写作任务】 <br /> 青少年也有很多属于自己的小秘密。家长们应允许他们保留一些私人空间。请根据下表写 <br />——篇短文,指出家长的一些错误做法,并给这样的家长提一些建议,使家长和孩子更好的 <br />交流。词数:120--150。 <br /> 【思路指导】 <br />1.思路点拨: <br /> 审题第—步:确定文体、人称,这是一篇说理议论文,应以第三人称为主; <br /> 审题第二步:确定全文论点。从信息提示来看,全文的中心应是批评家长的这些错误做 <br />法并且给这样的家长提建议; <br /> 审题第三步:确定写作要点。 <br /> 2.选词、造句: <br /> ①交流产生困难 <br /> have some difficulty in communicating <br /> ②偷看孩子日记 <br /> peep at their children's diaries <br /> ③不敲门就进入孩子房间 <br /> walk into their children's rooms without knocking <br /> ④私自查看孩子书包 <br /> look through children's schoolbags without permission <br /> ⑤看别人写给孩子的信件 <br /> read letters sent to their children <br /> ⑥家长应明白:他们不再是小孩子了。 <br /> Parents should know they are no longer little girls or boys. <br /> ⑦为了更好地了解他们,父母应设身处地为孩子们着想。 <br /> To learn more about their children,parents should remember what they did at <br />the same age. <br /> ⑧更重要的是,家长还要尊重和理解孩子。 <br /> The more important thing is that parents should give them enough respect and <br />understanding. <br /> 【参考范文】 <br /> Now some parents have some difficulty in communicating with their <br />children. <br />Children can't understand what their parents have done.Some parents peep at their <br />children's diaries : some walk into their children's rooms without knocking ; <br />some:look through their schoolbags without permission:others read letters sent <br />to their children.Are these really good ideas? We are afraid not.Parents should <br />know they ale no longer little <br />To learn more about:their children,parents should remember what they did at the <br />same age.And the most:important:thing is that: parents should give them respect ; <br />and understanding. <br />实例指导 2—独生子女 <br /> <br />【写作任务 】 <br />自从我国实行一对夫妇只生一个孩子的计划育政策以来,很多家庭都是独生子女,孩子娇生 <br />养,在家吃啥有啥,穿啥买啥而且都是名牌。请写一篇 120—150 词的英语短文来阐述一下 <br />一对夫只生一个孩子的利与弊、 <br /> 【思路指导】 <br /> 这是一篇开放性作文:这类作文的特点是只出主题,或两三点提示,或一段素材,然后 <br />由考在此基础上充分发挥想象力, 自由创作。开放性作文对考生的能力要求更高,考查也 <br />全面。它不仅查考生的书面语言表达能力、语言组织能力,而考查考生的逻辑思维能力、发 <br />散思维能力、丰富想象力,以及多角度考虑问题的创新思维能力。与控制性作文相比,开放 <br />性作文不仅扩大了命题的写作的范围,提高了考生的写作兴趣,而且把对考生的考查提高到 <br />更高、更新的层面上来。因此开放作文给学生提供了更广的写作空间,有利于培养学生的创 <br />新意识,同时也要求考生必须要思维活跃开善于发散思维,近几年此题型常考的文体有两种: <br />记叙文和议论文。记叙丈 就是要求考生根据给的材料,展.开充分的想象,拓展原材料, <br />把整个事情表达清楚。而议论文要求考生对所给的材料进行分析,然后发表自己的观点或看 <br />法。 <br /> 突破开放性作文的方法如下: <br />子有利有弊。第二部分:分别...