0<br />经典范文<br />1、表达观点类<br /> 在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社<br />就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be <br />taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一<br />种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。<br />授课形式一：只用英语<br /> 优点：有助于提高听说能力等<br /> 缺憾：不易听懂等<br /> 结论：……<br />授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用<br /> 优点：易于理解等<br /> 缺憾：英语氛围不浓等<br /> 结论：……<br />注意：1.词数 100~120，短文开头已给出(不计词数)。<br /> 2.参考词汇：atmosphere 氛围<br /> I prefer my English classes to be taught in...<br />满分文(一)<br /> I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is <br />that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the <br />class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a <br />better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us. <br /> However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so <br />strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed. <br /> Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It <br />can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.<br />名师点评：<br /> 审题是作文的第一要素，本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证<br />明了这一点。本文运用多种复杂句式，整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者<br />的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道，可以参看好句中的分析。<br /> <br />1<br />背诵内容：<br />好词 1.advantage n.优点 2.be familiar with，对某人熟悉 3. atmosphere n.气氛<br />1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is <br />that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.<br /> 我更喜欢采用双语教学，其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。<br /> 2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.<br />满分文(二)<br /> I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to <br />improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in <br />English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of <br />English so that I can quickly make progress. That’s why I prefer total English. However, since <br />we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. <br />Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in <br />English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.<br />名师点评：<br /> 本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用，将作者的意思<br />表达得完整而准确，从而映衬了词汇的重要性；其次，本文的句式以复杂句为主，表语、定<br />语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。<br />应背好词：1. immerse v.沉浸 2. explanation n.解释 3. make progress 取得进步<br />应背好句：1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be <br />total...
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