高考英语满分作文及名师评析

新课标高考英语满分作文及名师评析 <br />【全国卷I海南、宁夏】 <br />　　 <br />【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英 <br />国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson <br />不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括： <br />1．外出购物 <br />2．替房东还书 <br />3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton <br />Coffee）见面取消2）此事已告知Susan <br />3) 尽快回电 <br />　　注意：1. 词数100左右； <br />2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 <br />Mrs. Wilson, <br />I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have <br />taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. <br />At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t <br />meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something <br />important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you <br />could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her <br />back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this <br />change. <br />Yours, <br />Li Hua <br />[名师点评] <br />本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学 <br />习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准 <br />确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的 <br />逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因 <br />此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁 <br />明了，开头要开门见山。 <br />【北京卷】 <br />　　【试题回放】情景作文　　 <br />假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召， <br />你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍 <br />植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的&ldquo;绿色行动&rdquo;专栏写一篇以&ldquo;Gree <br />n Action in Our Class&rdquo;为题的英文稿件。　　注意：词数不少于60 <br />　　提示词：郊区 suburbs <br />April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on <br />that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking <br />and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. <br />Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. <br />Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board <br />reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some <br />photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a <br />sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our <br />environment. <br />　　【名师点评】　　 <br />本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章 <br />思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词 <br />短语作状语等较好的句式表达。 <br /> <br />　　【北京卷】 <br />　　【试题回放】开放作文　　 <br />请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50 <br />In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following <br />picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you <br />understand it. <br />What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is <br />ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as <br />we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles <br />that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we <br />Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. <br />The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is d...